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No more Kings.

Saucer with rings
Like it should belong in space.
Although this hit with a crash
(and it was no lie)
The gentle clink-clink-cink of the cup
like a wavering heartbeat, so erratic.
Wrinkled hands clutching at what she had left.

The guitar was silent.
Except for one song, on refrain.
Tears?
The sudden   stop
of the background (music)
Which bought all the memories back.
thinking of his unjustified existance.

A holy man praying.
Witness to the chaos
Smiling, somewhat content.
And it was all over...
for him, at least.


No more Kings.
©2007-2008 ~critical-condition
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First poem in ages.
I'm interested to hear what you guys think.
Im not going to tell you what it's about. First one to get it right gets a prize (hahaha)
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~SkyBastard:iconSkyBastard: Jul 8, 2007, 6:25:32 AM
I have no idea what it's about, so I'm going to stare at it for ages. o_0

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Made of love and vibrations.
~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Jul 8, 2007, 6:52:51 AM
awesome plan.

U ok?

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
~SkyBastard:iconSkyBastard: Jul 8, 2007, 7:07:28 AM
I'm feeling really good, really well.
What about you?

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Made of love and vibrations.
~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Jul 8, 2007, 7:27:07 AM
blegh. Apart from that, I'm ok :)

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
*ghost28:iconghost28: Jul 8, 2007, 9:06:47 AM
:lick:

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~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Jul 8, 2007, 11:05:28 AM
...thats what it's about....

*disbelief*

hahaha

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*ghost28:iconghost28: Jul 8, 2007, 11:11:10 AM
almost certainly

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~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Jul 9, 2007, 11:43:57 AM
:D :w00t:

English hwk awaits!

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everyone else is already taken.
*ghost28:iconghost28: Jul 9, 2007, 12:57:57 PM
well hwk away

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