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protection by teh mafia. by a. by ~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition:





:the truth, which is questionable:

To be protected from those we love
so much.
Protection from heartbreak
and sin.
- From the wolf under the bed.

Caged up and boxed away
Suffering for those things
I have yet to suffer.
This pain as great as the joy of being free.

:the setting:

The bars reach up and into the beyond.
The floor is where I stand
and its is cold
I wonder where these bars go to
and what is on the other side of them.

:the observation:

These bars
Go into my mind
tunneling through
a caged labyrinth...
What are you protecting me from?
because it cant be worse than this.

:the understanding:

You didnt explain,
but I understand.
You protect me from
'the outside'
but its not whats in the outside
its how I'm gonna react to it.

Protecting me from myself,
perhaps?
or protecting myself from me?
- protecting the outside from me?
and you shrug and say yes.
Yes yes.

and slam the door.
©2007-2008 ~critical-condition
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I worte it, like I'm seeming to do more and more frequently these days, in the text box as it pops up.

Spur-of-the-moment-type-thing.

lots of hyphens.

note! The image is not mine, and the original photograph can be found here [link] I have used it with permission!
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*ThornyEnglishRose:iconThornyEnglishRose: Feb 6, 2007, 4:41:12 AM
I love how you break all the rules in your poetry - including things I wouldn't even think of.
~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Feb 6, 2007, 4:49:06 AM
Rules?

Thank you very much foe both the comment and the :+fav:
To be honest, I just put down whatever is in my mind, format it a bit and call it a poem. I dont set out to write poetry, but I'm glad it comes across well :hug:

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
*ThornyEnglishRose:iconThornyEnglishRose: Feb 6, 2007, 4:54:12 AM
That's the best way to write a poem. :D (Just never admit that to, like, a teacher or anyone.)
~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Feb 6, 2007, 5:03:28 AM
okies...my lips are sealed! tehe...thank you (again)

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
~maikaura:iconmaikaura: Feb 6, 2007, 5:37:29 AM
Oo! I rather like this. :+fav: for you my friend!!
~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Feb 6, 2007, 5:39:21 AM
:hug: thankie so very much!

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
~red-hot-chili-pepper:iconred-hot-chili-pepper: Feb 6, 2007, 9:41:10 AM
I like it, some lines really stand out, such as "protect the outside from me", well done:)

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"I Am The Man With No Name .... Zapp Brannigan"
~Piuri-extract:iconPiuri-extract: Feb 6, 2007, 11:40:06 AM
You make every word your own! Wonderful

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~critical-condition:iconcritical-condition: Feb 7, 2007, 2:44:38 AM
thank you so much! :hug:

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.